Old Lady-Creepypasta

My informant sent me several examples of digital folklore, including memes and creepypastas. This particular creepypasta is different from other examples i have read, in that it is very much attempting to sound like a real incident, without invoking the supernatural at all.


“One day at a shopping mall in the afternoon, a woman was coming out of the mall from a shopping spree. She was in a happy mood. She had gotten to her car and loaded her stuff that she had bought into her trunk. When she was done loading, she shut the door of her trunk and she saw an old lady standing by the passenger side of her car.

“Would you be a darling and give me a lift home? I don’t have a car and I was walking all day,” the old woman said.

“I’d be happy to,” the woman said, unlocking the door for the old woman.

As the shopper started to make her way around the car to the driver’s side, she started to feel uncomfortable. So when she got in the car, she looked in her purse and said “Darn, I can’t find my credit card. I’m going inside to see if anybody found it.”

“I’ll wait for you here,” the old woman said.

The woman left to go look for help. Then she found a security guard and told him the situation.

They went back to the woman’s car and the passenger door was wide open. On the seat of the car was a shopping bag that the old woman had been carrying. Inside of the bag was the old woman’s dress and a gray haired wig, along with a huge butcher’s knife, a video camera, and a roll of duct tape.”

My analysis:

I believe that this story is intended to be viewed as an urban legend, or a recounting of a real incident. The tale may have more added legitimacy due to the fact that the killer escapes, leading to a possible resumption of their activities in the future. The setting of a killer preying on good samaritans may be an intended message, of a person being punished for an assumed good deed. It may cause the reader to be more wary about helping others in the future as a result. In addition, the story may gain legitimacy through repeated postings, as someone may hear it recounted from a ‘friend of a friend’ as if it were a real news story. As the story does no invoke the supernatural, but instead implies a threat from another person through the course of everyday activities, the creepypasta is more effective in its simplicity.